O’ bubble..
Lovely transparent bubble;
Lovely colors all your body through ;
On addition with of your same kind
Your beauty really doubles;
Though you are short-lived ;
Always ready to attract all our attention;
O’ bubble..
You are truly spell-bound;
Always light and cool as you are;
Make me feel life’s too short;_come on
Carry the color in you;
Never bother to shoulder burden unwanted;
Move on light ,gentle all your life through;
presenting yourself lovely;
Making yourself the really special ‘YOU’;
You are my favorite – Yes,
My all time favourite;
I forget myself looking at you;
I Feel you are here to teach me;
Can’t touch you b’cos _ am scared you’ll
Disappear with a PLOP!
You live elegant move gently and
Finish your journey off;
With a wonderful grace _ I
Look up to you as my ideal master;
As you still linger in my thoughts _
With an extraordinary flair……….
submitted to
http://bluebellbooks.blogspot.com/2011/09/short-story-slam-week-11.html
so true a bubble lives so short thats why its so atractive .beautiful saying
Thank you so much….
love bubbles, your poem is superb.
smiles.
Happy Potluck!
Thank yoou soooo much… I am encouraged by your words…
wonderful … 🙂
Thank you my dear…
When were young especially bubbles have such a magical quality. They really are beautiful and there’s something whimsical and carefree about them, they certainly have the power to summon your inner child
yes! bubbles fascinate everyone…..thank you so much for your words …
Whimsical indeed!
Some thoughts here.. xx
Thank you dear…
I never recognised this precious thing before…
Awesome saying…….
Thank you soooo much you have inspired me when ever I write ……Your comment is most welcomed one bro!
wow, very entertaining.
Thank you Luna…Glad you liked the poetry…..
A sublime write – bubbles have a certain magical quality to them and you captured it very aptly
Thank you Sir..You made my day….happy to see such a comment from a versatile writer….Thanks again…..
Awesome saying about bubble….in childhood i loved bubbles very much….but now this poems reflects the true value of bubble…Nice didi…
Thank you so much….me too …..love bubble…Amazingly found the inner truth of it just now………..
nice didi
Thank you sumi…glad you visited….
wow it’s such a nice poem made by you! keep it up! :))
Yaa! dear thank you so much…Am so happy by your comment 🙂
Very nice and bubbly write! I like it!
http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/09/30/bubbles-and-lies/
Thank you so much 😀 yet to visit your entry sir.. I won;t miss it
graceful lesson is cool to learn and have.
Thank you dear… It took me only few seconds to write this and even I am surprised about this…
cool bubble piece.
Thanks for sharing.
That’s too nice of you…Glad you liked it…