15 minutes to write on this topic
A Natural Calamity
Announced my Geo-Teacher;
Every one grabbed the pen _
to write it at once;
My teacher looked at me _
Cos’ in studies I was number one;
I didn’t lift my pen _
had put my head down;
Tears rolled off my eyes _
causing my teacher surprise;
held to her hands tight;
She came near me_
to enquire what was my plight;
I couldn’t stop crying _
When she caressed me through my hair;
Oh dear! what happened ?
Can I help you? would you like to share;
Controlling my sob _
I started to mumble;
“My mother passed away _
Is a calamity by itself”
I continued further,
“She went to Japan for work……
and never returned back”
As i ended up my words _
My teacher was totally stunned;
She was out of any choice _
For she knew nothing can be done…….
such a well written piece on such a sad topic…
hugs
Thank you so much…
Thank you and glad that you visited my blog….
The worst scenario ever–praying this is fiction. But you wrote well-I never saw this coming.
Thank you so much …Happy that you visited my blog….
moving story,
losing one’s mother is super heartbreaking, well done.
nothing helps, true!
Thank you friend…..
This is heartwrenching.
Captured beautifully.
Thank you so much for encouraging….
I admit I didn’t expect the tragic direction the poem would take. Heart-breaking, you really captured the helplessness and the sadness.
Thanks my attempt didn’t go waste…Thank you for encouraging me…
this was touching……
the sad terrified child materialized before my eyes as i read the poem
Thank you so much , I am happy that the poetry served it’s purpose….happy that I have many now to encourage me…
too touchy …. no one go as deep as you gone in this thought… awesome ….
Thank you , I am graced by your compliment sis…hugs…
Your poem brought this tragedy to a personal level. Heartbreaking and so well-written.
Thanks for the encouraging words….So happy on your visit to my blog..Thanks..
This is amazing poem on sad topic…
Trully heartouhing………. “(
Thank you brother! So happy that you had seen this….
I hope and pray that this is not true for you.
If it is, my heart and soul go out to you.
Luna
No dear! Not to worry, It was just an attempt to give the topic a new dimension….I see a very beautiful human residing in you….Thanks for visiting and gracing me…
Your poem reflects the sadness many children experience when they are forced to deal with loss. Thank-you for sharing. xo
Glad you liked it……Happy that you visited my blog…
a good expression of loss, and the difficult situations teachers sometimes unexpectedly find themselves in
mm…..I love the teaching profession and appreciate the greatness of the profession…I believe they have the large contribution in stabilizing the emotions of every individual kid……
Simple Poems with Fulltooooooooooo Emotions…..Bindaaas hai didi….
Thanks dear…Happy to see kith and kin visit the blog…Thanks again………
A heartily touching one
Thank you your presence and comment means to me more brother…..
it’s very good! full of emotions
MMM..Just attempted one and It came out so well…