The kiss which he gave me _
Left me mesmerizing;
I could feel his love _
As my heart was heavily pulsating;
It seemed as if I knew him for ages_
And his love is one for which I was waiting;
My words were dumped in silence_
as his eyes were constantly gazing;
My ego perished momentarily_
to allow his tress passing;
Within no time I lost myself _
a beautiful story was commencing;
I am not the author at all_
but so exotic and erotic was the writing;
Engrossed was he and exhausted me_
But could feel a kind of joy flowing;
God knows what has to happen next _
But I was just there participating……
(who ever has done this sketch thanks…I am using this in my blog for enhancing the poetry …)
{Poetry submitted to Thursday Poet Rally week 48#}
Sunday, August 28, 2011
POETRY PICNIC WK 2 : The Kiss
pure2core 
Very sweet and romantic =) Such a feeling of warmth and desire with the poem
Thank you so much….so nice of you…
tense and hot write,
the words ring perfectly right…
Thanks for sharing.
Happy RaLLY.
Thank you dear… You are most welcome 🙂
A horripilating poem!
Thank you so much …..I am graced by your visit…
Romantic and lovely 🙂
Thank you so much Ina 🙂
Cool, especially loved the line
‘My ego perished momentarily-
To allow his tress passing’..!!
oh! thanks.. you liked it…
very beautiful…
🙂
Thank you so much for your comment..Glad that you visited the blog…
lovely indeed! keep it up! glad to be of acquaintance. my entry if you have time.. http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2009/11/24/fluttering-in-an-envelope/
Thank you so much..Glad that you liked the post…
how sweet.
you rock, thanks for sharing…
🙂
So nice of you…Thank you.
Greetings:
Hope all is well.
Noting that you have won the perfect poet award for week 58,
what an achievement, thanks for your outstanding contribution to us
along the way, keep up the excellence. Best!
Come join our poetry rallyby Friday if you wish to mingle and get inspired!
A poem of your choice or a free verse is accepted.
Merry Christmas and Happy New Year.
Looking forward to seeing you share.
Respect and hugs.
xoxox