yup , you know what…. I got this all of a sudden…I am so surprised that I could relate such a heavy topic to the heart-lightening shore,sand and sand castles…Thanks a lot friend….
I’ve been spending a fair chunk of time by the shore lately, so I came to your poem because of the title. Also wrote about a sandcastle in a recent poem. I enjoy your poem, and like the idea of love trying and trying again to triumph against the sometimes relentless forces that would knock it down.
That’s so nice of you that you could perceive the inner meaning of the poetry…Thank you so much for your wonderful comment…Glad you stopped to read this post…Happy getting acquainted to you…
Awesome!!
Thank you bro!
i like what you said about “Love remains ever victorious”. 🙂
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Thanks for stopping by my site! Yours is great too! We have the same taste I see!!
Your poem is very well written and executed. My favorite line is:
Love is sand and expectations make the castle
That is talent!
Thanks a lot dear..
love this,
this one stands out very clearly, smiles.
🙂
Thanks a lot…cello..
grains of truth in a fun package– thanks!
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Hello.
“Love remains ever victorious”..how true those words are.
Nicely penned & imaged.
Thanks for sharing & for your kind words on my entry. Much appreciated.
Bashful Lady
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Yes it does! this is a very good poem about the abstract. thanks.
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‘Love is sand and expectations make the castle” This was one awesome poem. Love the comparability: of love sand and expectations, the castle
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I like this thought process. Love is like the sand; ever there, yet rearranged, and flowing with the tides.
http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/10/19/perfect-love/
Thanks you sir…was actually searching for your entry yesterday…will surely read your poem…I am really interested in reading every one of yours…
Hi pure2core, I like this poem, the sandcastle that is made of expectations, very well done!
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So very, VERY true 🙂
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Awesome! I love the idea of building a new sandcastle after being swiped down by waves. Simply inspiring 🙂
yup , you know what…. I got this all of a sudden…I am so surprised that I could relate such a heavy topic to the heart-lightening shore,sand and sand castles…Thanks a lot friend….
Excellent! We can always rebuild again no matter how great the devastation. Thank you for reminding us. A great piece.
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agreeable statements,
lovely imagery.
Thank you friend..
I’ve been spending a fair chunk of time by the shore lately, so I came to your poem because of the title. Also wrote about a sandcastle in a recent poem. I enjoy your poem, and like the idea of love trying and trying again to triumph against the sometimes relentless forces that would knock it down.
That’s so nice of you that you could perceive the inner meaning of the poetry…Thank you so much for your wonderful comment…Glad you stopped to read this post…Happy getting acquainted to you…