I’ve sent my thoughts to a garden,
to enjoy the sweet grass smell;
I’ve sent my chaotic mind,
to slide and skip for a while;
I’ve granted leave to my reasoning power,
let it not get in to my way;
I’ve collected all my creativity,
to perk-up my life in gay;
Hurray! am in vacation now_
I feel enthusiasm brimming out of me;
Cheer-up Hey.. all friends dear to me,
would you like to join with me? 🙂
Submitted to Goose Berry Garden “poetry picnic _ Week 4
pure2core 
love the open two lines.
very divine poem.
love the open two lines.
very divine poem.
Thanks dear…
Yes! We are taking a short vacation this week. Much needed! Love this poem!
http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/09/11/farmers-lament-2/
oh! thanks…really… I am at home yet enjoying the vacation mood at home with the poetic community…
Entertaining and uplifting poem. Love it.
Here is my entry
http://jackedwardspoetry.blogspot.com/2011/09/rose.html
Thank you so much..I’ve tried to give my best 🙂
nice! my potluck.. http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2011/04/09/summer-wind/
Thanks..
wow sending your thought to the garden and loving the sweet smell this is a great opening for your wonderful poem
http://gatelesspassage.com/2011/08/27/the-island-breeze/
Thank you Sarah…I wish I could do it in reality but my thoughts eat me up often..I have pampered it and never do I condemn any of its act 😛
I enjoyed it very much.. thanks for sharing my friend…you lines are beautiful like these ones…
“I’ve collected all my creativity,
to perk-up my life in gay;”
Look forward to seeing you again next week… in Poetry picnic with the topic “Objects”
Shashi
ॐ नमः शिवाय
Om Namah Shivaya
http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com/2011/09/whispers-in-memories-way-of-soul.html
At twitter @VerseEveryDay
Thank you so much..all of your encouragement boost me up to write more effective lines..I am still in learning process..Help me out please..